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Why does he possess her, the delicate flower.
What could he have done to deserve, such a delicate treasure for he cannot measure a man of my spirit or nerve.
For nights I lay crying, so quietly dying; for a taste of such heaven as her.
I have fought, and I've bled, I've both followed and led and I've earned no such honor or laud.
I reel with emotion, and she bears no notion that she is a trophy to fraud.

I force self-composure and follow my orders; a humble spectator to life.

A rock in the stream, insurmountable dreams wash over me; I am alone.

Such a glorious visage to have graced my eyes, perhaps I'm just greedy to lust.
She hath gifted me with a soft glance from her eye, and I guilt that my rage is unjust.
She has made her choice, though it burns in my breast; this pain is one I cannot bear.
I have bled, I have cried, and have watched her glide by; oblivious to my despair.
Such is the way of the world I dare say.
Justice and Solace are words.
So I rise to my feet, and I shall not retreat; as I await my next glimpse of that girl.
©2006-2009 ~CPLWeeks
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Author's Comments

This is just something I scrawled during lunch. The motivations are my own. It's not written about anyone in particular, just a general expression of my frustrations toward the perpetual attraction of beautiful, angelic women to human trash. It's another notch into the spine of my copy of 'Mysteries of Life' that I'll never be able to understand. You're free to leave your thoughts. Thank you.

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:iconseekerofdeath:
Lovely. I especially like the last few ending sentances.
:iconcplweeks:
Thank you very much :) Good to see you're still lurking about. You haven't posted anything in almost two weeks! :cry:

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'I only regret that I have one life to lose for my country.'
~Nathan Hale
:iconseekerofdeath:
D: Yeah, I know. I've been sorta busy lately, we're moving into a new house. My wacom tablet has been packed up, and all I have left in my room is my computer and my mattress XD I'll most likely go on a drawing spurge once everything is set up in the new house. ^^
:iconcplweeks:
Excellent! :bounce: I'm anxious to see the results of a forced, sequestered artistic binge! ;-)

wait... you mean there's MORE to life than a computer and a mattress ?!? :confused:

;-)

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'I only regret that I have one life to lose for my country.'
~Nathan Hale
:icondanseusenoire:
Wow, I like what you've written there, the verse scheme is very good, I like the parts in the middle where the words are 'flowing' (hope you know what I mean - I'm much better in understandig english than in expressing my thoughts with it ^^; ) as well as the subject...awakens some memories..

Greetings! :)

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:iconcplweeks:
Thank you very much, :blush: I'm happy you were able to find meaning in it. You needn't worry about anything, I'm very impressed with your level of English comprehension. You do wonderfully! I sincerely appreciate your praise; It means a lot to me. Thank you! :happycry:

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'I only regret that I have one life to lose for my country.'
~Nathan Hale
:icondanseusenoire:
You're welcome! :) And I'm glad you say my english level is good - would you mind telling my english teacher this? :D ;) ..she gives me permanently bad marks..*sniffs tragically*

Greetings! //and by the way: I now got oblivion! :D :D It's so wonderful ^^

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:iconlillambert:
beautiful...and amazingly...i've wondered the same from time to time....why is it that just when i believed i was worthy of love, i would find myself only a trophy- to be placed on a shelf-forgotten-unloved...
yes, i have been a trophy.
But now i know that i would rather be alone then ever be the items discarded on a whim.
Never have i won the battle of being chosen over another....and that weighs heavy on a soul.
i like this one matthew...
i like it a lot.

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Mahakasyapa Smiled :)
:iconcplweeks:
It's not amazing that you've wondered the same thing, as it's a glaring injustice we all see everyday. I can never find the words or deeds to apologize for your mistreatment, I can only delight at your freedom from that cage, and vow that somewhere, there's someone better. Flowers bend toward the sun, you needn't do any different.

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'I only regret that I have one life to lose for my country.'
~Nathan Hale

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